Nice

I REFUSE to review this (Because in the name you said plz review)

Percussion is nice. Good job.
Fakest choir I ever heard (since Titanic)

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I thought this was a really nice piece with a really good beginning part in it and I really enjoyed the flute and percussion because you did a very good job on that but It sounds like this song would be on the menu of some kind of Rambo movie or something because of the war theme in it I don't know but I really like it.

You did a really nice job on the horns too but it seems like this was a little bit too short to me but I really don't see how it could have gotten better because it would just be more repetitive so good job on that too but I think this needed more beats to it to make it a bit better because it is kind of plain to me so please fix that because there is a lack of details on it.

There;s not much to be said about this but you need to work on the details and the beats a it more because to me it was pretty plain and needed more too it because this could be a really good piece really.

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-Joshsouza

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The percussion in this was definitely the best part of the piece; it really helped set the atmosphere perfectly from the get-go. That being said, I almost wish there was a little more variation in them as it sounds like you've used the same sound throughout and just changed the velocity a little bit, which get to be a bit repetitive in the parts where there's not much else to focus on. But in general they're a great choice and the sound in them were excellent.

The instruments apart from that were also pretty cool; the flute gave this air of desolation while the trombone (I'm guessing?) gave that hint of an aggression that may be coming or may have passed. Wasn't a big fan of the choir pad as a sound, but the notes they were playing sounded pretty awesome. The cut-out of the drums at 1:15-1:20 felt like it needed something more than the choir there just to give it a little more texture, or failing that it needed to last a little longer, just to let the absence of the drums be felt a little more.

You build up the emotion well, but by the end I'm left wanting there to have been more of a swell in the middle or by the end, because it kind of stays at the same melancholic level. Which works, definitely, but definitely leaves a little more room for development if you ever thought about making this a little longer.

It's pretty beautiful, but I think there's definite potential for it to have been even more so.

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Pretty cool.

I liked what I heard, very atmospheric and I could certainly here it as a march (kind of that, choose your destiny or a Mortal Kombat thing).

Like the variation of sounds used. . Only thing I didn't like was the choir when it sort of pitchbended down at ~1:17. The bend felt really plastic (it didn't seem to fit in). Eveything else was nice.

In terms of effects, I think the reverb used on the percussion wasn't the best (if you did), it sounded like (to me) that it was being played in an assembly hall (sound didn't seem to bounce very far or something). .

One more thing, maybe add a few more instrument parts in (like tuned mallets or something) to give it more atmosphere. . I did like it, nice work.

Don't think this suits the classical genre in my opinion.

Anwar Louis ^_^
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I guess when I started listening to this I was hoping for a different final march of some sort. This is definitely a Native American or Indian final march song.

I like the picture that you paint in the listeners heads. The beginning starts out like a March, and then suddenly they run into the enemies, and a battle starts, but they aren't successful in any means, hence the title final march. It was more about pride and not giving up no matter what.

The ending left a little to be desired. It seemed to quit randomly in the middle of something. Are you sure you didn't cut it a bit short? I think it could be developed a bit more.

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