Hmmmm, actually not so bad, more like good:)
Hi, Tolgus! I'm very glad you decided to submit on NG. I can promise you that it's worth it! :) Since this is your first submition, I will give you a very criticising review. Well, only so it would help you getting better. Btw. I hear that you have a great potensial to get very good! :D
First thing i would criticise is that the tune is kind of boring in the length, though some of the synths helps the tune.
The climax arrives to fast. It's like a snowball: suddenly it's not here and suddenly it is. You should try to make a longer and more exciting build up. 2nd time the climax is it just stops out of nowhere including the song. make an outro to the song. Try also to use a crash or something on the climax.
The bassdrum is way to low and unpowerfull. Also use a banging bass on the cilmax(between the bassdrum).
A big suggestion: Turn the tempo down to at least 140 bmp.
The song isn't so bad and if you fix on some of the sings i just wrote, it could get much better.
Hope you didn't find the review to much criticising...
keep up the good work! :)
Just keep producing and making songs and you'll get very good! :D
Thanks. Yeah, i knew something was wrong and it needed a lot of work, but my interest in it kind of died. Always like that. But, on a next one i'll try to work on those points. Thanks for the review.