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MH16: Time Flies -NGAD-

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Here's a song i made for the NG Audio Deathmatch. I really rushed this song and i'm not satisfied with it yet so expect some edits.

-Edit-
I changed some things, made a new section and i changed the ending a bit.

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Awesome, as usual.

I don't see why everybody tries to point out the tiniest flaws. I think that whatever you're doing, you're doing it right.

FairSquare responds:

Well, people who point out tiny flaws just want to help and i appreciate that.
I appreciate your review also! :D

Well it's been a while...

This really reminds of A song from Jurassic Park on Snes, it was one of my favorite vg songs of the day and probably still is. With that being said I don't think it is possible for to not like the progressions and flow of the song. I was really diggin the song and then the horn hit me, at first it is kind of hard to grasp because it kind of overpowers the other elements of the song but after a while it settles in nicely. I probably would have gone a different route and used a basic sin wave and some re verb or something but that's just personal taste. I'm not really sure if there were any rules for this competition or what this was for or if you just wanted to stick with classical instruments but some electronic elements could have really expanded the track. One thing though that really made me happy is how your writing style has changed from the last time i heard your stuff. You always used to use a trill type note melody and I didn't hear it hear, it was like listening to a completely new artist. I'm on my friend's laptop right now so I don't have the best speakers but the drums sound well mixed and the strings flow nice, the only think that I didn't "agree" with was the horns, it's almost impossible to get a good sounding horn without live recording. Well done! I'll probably check out some more stuff later but it's good to see changes (or hear) I'll see you later.

Chevy Chase

FairSquare responds:

Thanks a bunch! :)

not bad

but you'v done much better even if this one is interesting: the quality is ok, the rhythm is good, the melody isn't so bad BUT a lot of things are missing maybe a 2.0 of this song would be ok
8/10 4/5 (come one I know you can do a realy good thing so keep mooving)
M-M the French one

FairSquare responds:

Yep, i have done much better :p
Thanks for your review!

It does sound somewhat rushed :P

The whole song overall sounded pretty cool, but it sounds maybe a bit too cheesy. The ending could use a bit more thought into it, but then again you wanted to submit SOMETHING for round 2 ;) Sorry, I do not know much about this genre so I can not really explain myself very well here.

5/5 , 8/10. keep it up, I liked it.
Check out my submission for round 2 :)

FairSquare responds:

Haha, well, thanks for the review ;p
I checked out your song and i think you're gonna win this round. I still hope for a little miracle though :p
Good luck to you!

barely

i think you barely made it into the deadline man, either way heres the review

it does sound rushed, it really lacks depth, intricacy, and does sound a bit half-assed

those horns are pretty good sounding though

my big gripe is with the drums, they just lack any feel to them, no pop in any of it :/

awww that ending wasnt very good man, its faaaar to abrupt, so much could have followed it, im thinkin a soft piano part

i think it could be much better, which is unfortunate, your def. a good contender for the deathmatch

let me know if you add on to this man :)

mind checkin out my submission for round 2?

4/5 7/10

peace out

SessileNomad

FairSquare responds:

Yeah, i submitted about 20 mins before the deadline :p
I changed a lot of things just now. But i don't know if i made it better.. or worse.
Anyway, i'll check your submission out now. Thanks a lot for the review!

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Downloads
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Score
4.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 8, 2010
12:36 PM EST
File Info
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4.1 MB
2 min 13 sec

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