I couldn't get into it,
It was far too short, the whole thing felt like a build up for something way better, which I hope you end up doing with this. It was good, but only for an intro and not a full song, add onto this. 6/10 3/5
I wanted it too be short, its supposed to portray a man on his deathbed kinda and its like the words he is saying, i have been very tempted to add another bar though.