Good music, poor lyrics
Personally, I think that if you're after ambient, you don't need words, save for maybe some sort of high pitched latin stuff from a choir on occasion. The music is good, well paced and well thought through, if a little poor in the quality stakes. I'd suggest messing around with the equalisation, taking the bass out and adding treble, to make it sound less muffled.
Yes, this can be a little long of a piece - I'd have considered making it slightly shorter, by perhaps a minute or two and then looping it, so that it's usable in various flash pieces, since that's a great way to get your music listened to more.
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