I'm not at all familiar with this style of music, so I'm not even sure what you're aiming for, all I know is I like it! One thing I noticed is that this piece ended quite abruptly. The drum sound you've got going on is a bit too dominant in the beginning. Very good job, 9/10. I hope to hear more.
I'm not really aiming for anything. Just messing around right now. And, you're totally right about the bass drum. It's way too loud in this mix. Need to fix that.