agree with midnighttoday
The compression is a major draw back. Also, did you piece this together from copy written sources? Cause NG doesn't like that... Could potentially sound great, just needs a compression fix.
first off, MAJOR clipping! stick a limiter on those channels.
and yeahh, not bad actually. i think you're on to something, so spend some time on it. sounds really rushed.
i hope to hear a re-release.