Dis is da house

That i like. :) maybe a bit less distortion on the bass, more of a lowpass filter, but, that is my opinion on house. :3 love it

lovely track

however, I agree with mushroomhead that it gets far too thick. at 0:45, to be precise. I'd suggest chopping up that pattern you've got and using the same notes as stabs, offset in time from the beep-boops. :) would achieve a funky rhythmic effect and work as introduction to 1:15 when the thickness of the sound is actually pretty nice. :)

good but bad mixing

IT sounds good and its great to see you improving.. I remember your first entries and your way better than you were when I met you... heres some thing to work on in this song though

-Your bass sounds dont mix well as a group.. Im getting a huge clutter of mud sound from your sound

-Your lead line needs some EQ work because its dipping down into the bass frequencies and again making the whole thing muddy.. you need some highs other than the vocals in this track to make it sound good..

-Your drums are good.. I can hear the kick all the way through and it doesnt clip or get lost in the mix.

-I would say just to work on your leads and dont use so many damn saw synths at once.. that just makes for a cluster fuck of bad sound lol