_/I wish you were here\_[edit]

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_/I wish you were here\_[edit] - 4:47

I've been working on this one for awhile, finally got my first song complete with vocals, even though they aren't much, I think they sound good with the song.
And so I sung all the vocals, I tried my best :) haha
And for all those who reviewed this song before, I took all the criticism that was said and put/ changed this song to meet those needs.
If you review my song I will gladly review yours!
And one of my friends actually made the icon for the album!
(I don't make art, I make music :P )

Really hope you enjoy!!!




The vocals are quite good actually for a first try. I can definitely see you getting famous. But you sort of added sidechaining or whatever to the song which gets kind of annoying after a while. But this still deserves a 10/10.
good job!

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ShootingStar responds:

Yay :P haha thanks a bunch for the review!!



You have an awesome voice for trance/techno work.
It fits perfectly. Keep it up. :] I've already downloaded two of yours songs that I've listened to.

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ShootingStar responds:

Awesomesauce :) thanks for the downloads + review!!


Noice trance

G|ood solid trance u got here :) Good quality too however I reckon the kick could have a litle more power maybe, and maybe you could also fiddle with the vocals cos they sound a little... dull i think :P But apart from that top notch song with some good variation :) Also you got the trance genre very well :)


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ShootingStar responds:

Yay haha yeah, I agree with changing around the vocals.. don't really know what to do with them, but I'll mess around.
Thanks for the review!


Pretty neat

I liked it overall, I felt that it was a tad overcompressed though. The melodies are very catchy and stick in your head. I also like the way the vocals seem slightly off with that robotic feel. Very well put together :)

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ShootingStar responds:

Haha thanks for the review!!



Bass is a little overpowering in my opinion. Sounds like it is clipping a little too. The vocals adds a nice touch (nice voice =D) but i cant understand what you are saying, and i dont know if you really care cuz it sounds fine as is. Well, im listening again and i can tell what your saying better. I think that when the main lead cuts out for the quieter part, it comes at just the right time, nice. So, i guess my only point is if you mix and master better i think it will triple the awesomenees.

Keep Producing!

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ShootingStar responds:

Yes! haha so basically I really don't know what I'm doing when it comes to mastering :P
But time to learn!
Thanks for the review!!


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4.31 / 5.00

Jan 5, 2010
5:42 PM EST
File Info
7.7 MB
4 min 47 sec

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