I found this to be catchy, but wanted a bit more out of this. Allow me to explain...
Instrumentation: I really like how you mixed a bit of industrial in this, along with that drum kit. They were complementary to the hard aspects of this. Hell, anyone could mistake this for hardcore gabber music with that synth used.
Composition: It may not be up to par with many of the better trance songs in my favorites list, but you sure have some composition skills behind this. However, there were times where it felt repetitive, but not too monotonus.
Other: The only other problem with this is the tempo, which seems to be quite fast. On the other hand, there have been trance songs that are faster than 145 Beats-per-minute.
What was good:
-Nice use of industrial beats and a drum set.
-Good, ominous tone
What needs improving:
-The composition, while far from bad, could have used a bit more variation.
-Due to the sounds used and tempo; people could mistake this for hardcore/gabber.
Overall: Here's an eight from me, Psyce.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.