Pretty damn good!

Catchy& lively; the best improvement over the previous two.

Your best

Like I said before, this is your best song yet. Your structure and transitions were kinda poor though, but when we do our collab soon, I will teach you that stuff. I couldnt play this at the party because the speakers there were really shitty (I could barely even play my own shit) but the next party I go to for sure I'll play this.

Very nice!

However, you have a lot of issues with proper transitions it would seem, the melodies you do have are excellent, especially the one at 1:23, but they don't fit with the ones prior to them though, it even seems like they're out of key with the ones before them too, so try working on that more, however, most of the song did flow nicely. Good job, 8/10

¡wow!

great song man! i love the intro! sounds really awesome!!!!

keep going!

alright beatch

its fo sho the most kickass one you've made....so far. but yeah what that dpc692 guy said about tweakin it...to me the trasnitions b/n parts of the song good go a little smoother. dont get me wrong the song flows...but the song could flow smoother haha. but hey good job man!