The drums are awful!
Imo, I think you should at least make them a little more subtle. I loved the rest of the song though, especially the piano piece. Hope to hear it when it's done! Peace.
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This song isn't done yet either, but I am still working on it. Hoping to fix a couple of things a little later. But, in the meantime, this is what I have so far.
its a personal thing
i, personally, think its HIGHLY unprofessional to release unfinished work for review to the public crowd. - i like the idea you got going on here, but the drums and tempo bother me- too slow, and not a good feel. i like the ambient stuff and dark melody/ sounds you got- lol was that a sample from god of war???? (the vengeaful spartan) -- anyway good luck to you and hit me up when you've finished the track
-DJOXY-
iori22 responds:
Whether its unprofessional or not, I don't care. I submit it to see if people like what I have so far. There's no point in going with what sounds like crap. And no, it was not a sample from anything. Everything in my songs is original work.
Sucky snare brings it down.
The toneless snare doesn't fit with all these acoustic sounds. Otherwise, awesome. :D
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