i'm glad you did what you did on this song
good job on that sound - the one that's consistent during about 1:00 on and the combo you add w/ the synth is cool too (same melody) i like this setup alot, the sounds blend together nicely and make for an interesting feel- i think it needs more added to it though. some more hi hat or drum loops or effects, maybe a little ambience in ther to spyce things up a bit. good luck
(This review reflects my personal taste in music.) I like the motif that continues throughout the song, but neither the beat nor the motif ever develop into something with focus. What I mean is, each bar of the piece feels like it's trying to introduce something: it's too ambient-style for my liking.
Excellent instrumentation, though!
Everyone has ther opinion :D