I think that you could do with speeding the tempo up a little on this, or at least evening it out. Perhaps a metronome will assist you here, just to be able to keep the beat going, where you might just be falling off the pace or going too fast for it in places.
It's a nice little tune, possibly akin to something that someone might play on their front porch during a summer's rain shower. Sad, but somehow slightly upbeat.
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