I like how it feels like it's really building up to something. The ending sounds like a flub, but you say that the piece isn't done yet, so yeah.
I'll give it another listen when you finish it.
haha cheerz bud!
Yeah i really had no idea where i was going with this one... so I still havnt done anything with it yet.... plus the mastering for this one was shocking ^_^
But thanks for the Review and score!