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Author Comments

This song is a story about a girl who couldn't feel the depth of her love for the man in her life until he was gone. After so many false starts, she's ready to allow the relationship to really begin if he wants that, too. The ball is in his court. On your mark, let's go.

Reviews


Very nice

This is great song, I dont understand why newgrounds rates songs with vocals always so low.. doesn't make much sense to me.. maybe there jealous.

Either way, the vocals were great, piano was superb, and the bass was great as well as the percussion. I think it could definitely be mastered though to really give it that full and powerful feeling. Great stuff, keep it up.

~beachbum1001


lartuen responds:

Hey, thanks for your feedback! I am new to submitting music here, so I hadn't noticed the pattern with lower scores for songs with vocals. I agree that I need to do a proper mix/master of this. It's a little thin and the strings at the end aren't as powerful as they're supposed to be. Thanks again. I really appreciate your comments!

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Credits & Info

lartuen
Author

Listens
544
Downloads
36
Votes
3
Score
2.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 3, 2010
11:28 PM EST
Genre
Indie
File Info
Song
4.8 MB
5 min 14 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.