Although they are not wrong. The beginning is a little long and feels like it's missing something.
Sorry to bash.
Water makes me have to pee -_-
did not like the drums. feels like your trying to cram two genres together here and i dont think it really worked. wasnt really feeling the whole reverb thing youve got going too. and yeah the intro is a bit boring for me aside from the waah-ing pad riff. cool ideas tho.
Sorry for being a dick man, I didn't mean for you to take it off. It sounds good, although the drums get repetitive and the water is too loud in my opinion. you should just use your account for your songs from now on, alright? You've got just as much prestige as me, and you will now especially if you keep doing stuff like this! ...Well, with this software, anyway! ;)