The whole song sounded a little disconnected. The distorted bass sample didn't fit in with the rest of the song. The strings did not compliment the drums or bass at all. I might wanna work on that just a little.
Well yeah everyone's opinion but the thing here is its called Breakcore ... IOW total chaos :) you have to think away from the drums and bass and whatsoever and try to find a rythem within the total chaos
Then if you found my message in this sound you've become a real coredemon :D
Love the spooky sound in it. Very nice! :D
...I totally suck at FL now that i listen to your stuff.
Keep trying bro :) you can learn everyday ...Try reading the tut's ?