Very nice, sounds like you've been doing this for a little bit :)
This might be the 1st time you've added anything to the audio portal, but it's a great addition.
Oh yeah, constructive criticism.... umm.... Okay, I hate to do this, but I really don't have anything that MrF down there didn't say. I hate it when I'm like "I could use some constructive criticism or something, ANYTHING!" on my songs, and ppl are just like "I'TS GEWD NOTHING IMPROVE YOU NEED AWESOME!".
The only thing is... it doesn't really have an ending. I mean... kinda? I think? It's just a bit random for me.