Is there a chance to get the instrumental version of this? I quite like this as a stand-alone song.

Haha! This is dope!

That's actually a poem, so the tempo varies through out it ..but I really like this beat, so if you asend me the beat by its self I can write some lyrics to this!

fine song.

This is good. I like the piano, the low bass sound and the little choir voices you have here. There is a good amount of variation here and it all fits together nicely.

However, i do have a problem with the beat a little bit. I wish the bass drum was a little bit louder, it's hard to notice. Also, if feel like the snare sound isn't very "hip hopish". It sounds like it would be more comfortable in a rock song. Theres nothing wrong with the beat itself, I just think that the sounds used could be a little more impactful.