Trance will do
Not a bad effort for your first piece, I must say. Any of the dance / house / trance / garage genres will do and I'm sure that some people will eventually show you what the proper genre for this is, but I'm not the one who knows.
I think that there's a good beat to this piece carrying it along, but it can get a little monotonous in the middle - at 6 minutes long, this piece is certainly in need of some variation, as it can get a little repetitive. I know that's what clubbers like, so stick to it, but add a few more bits and pieces in there that will keep the non-clubbers listening.
You could stand to cut this piece down to as much as 5 minutes long, but don't be disheartened, it's a good start and I think that you can certainly take it further, which I look forward to.
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