was ok

you should have added kicks, drums, bases,claps, ect to this.. im curious to hear full.. i think it would sound good

I'm just not feeling it

Overall, I thought that this song was kind of boring. Not to say that you don't have something here. With a little bit of work you could certaintly pull something really cool off. But for now I just have to say that I don't much care for it. Since it seems that you will most likely be putting more work into it in the future allow me to offer some advice. Add some more tracks instead of just one. On top of that make the melody overall more interactive. Not just looping but something a bit louder and something a bit more lively if you get what I mean. More backround more sound and some more parts then just the same thing. Do all these and you got yourself something pretty cool. Until then, keep up the good work and I hope to hear more from you. Peace,
PO