Pretty good.

I dunno if it was me, but the recording quality was pretty bad. As a result of this, I don't think I could hear much of what you put in. The melodies in the tune that were in were really good, and regardless of the sound, I'd most certainly listen again. Over all it's a great job - I'd love to hear a remasterd version of this :).

You have an idea

Cool sounding song overall. With time I could start to get down to this sort of thing. Your melody at times was really interesting, the sound was okay at parts and you showed that this song has much potential. Just a few problems however that could use some improving. Your idea was very basic to say the least. While it was cool sounding, it was short and you looped it. Not that that is too bad or anything. Just expand your idea. Many times when I fall asleep I have many cool sounding ideas that run through my head. Then it all comes down to making that idea into a work of art. That is something that is crucial to creating music of any kinds. Your idea was really cool and you did present it, now just add to it to make it better. Another slight problem I had was the mastering. The sound of the chords of the guitar were a bit disoriented to say the least. They did not sound as good as they could. Your melody was cool at times inbetween the guitar chords however you just didn't really impress me with those parts. Try mastering that out a bit and see if you can't make it clearer. That would definetly improve upon the song. Other than that I cannot think of anything else. Cool job and I hope to hear more from you in the future. Peace,
PO