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Wild Woodland Terrain

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This song took me about 2 hours roughly, I actually already posted it. (but it was not the full version...) I made this to be a loop fo a video game level. Please comment, I love commentary and critisism good or bad.

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awesome, pretty energetic and creative

really digging it, i can imagine a woodland scene

SirKoto51 responds:

Wow, I haven't seen a review on this in awhile. And, might I say, it makes me happy. %u263A Thanks man.

A tad too short, a not that great

OK, let's get this review done:
The melody was ok, but no more really... It gets better at 0:25 where it gets a little more active. What's funny is that, the instruments sound very basic, like default loops, stuff like that, BUT somehow the entier melody and song manage to make it sound, not so bad. So, the melody is ok, but just ok, instruments are kinda flat, and the song is a tad too short, and, there's no real beat, but it's not that bad. I'm not saying "Your song sucks", no, it doesn't, it's not bad. But I'll throw you a bit of advice:
Give your song a good flowing beat, it's too flat.
Make better loops maybe.
That's kinda it... But you got potential, so you've got to be able to make better songs, I believe in you man!
So I'll just get to the scene:
New York, 1971
This is the story of Joe. Joe the bum. Joe is your average day bum, sitting there around the block, handing out his plastic cup for pennies and dimes.
But one day, Joe wakes up, to a supposedly average day, only to see in front of him a folder with "FBI" and "TOP SECRET" written on it. He doesn't jump on it, or grab it furiously, he just takes it, and goes through it quickly, interested.
He then finds a page with today's date, and an adress. He walks there, curious to see what he'll find. At that place, he doesn't find anything, so he waits... an hour. After an hour of just watching the world go by, he goes torwards a mail box and opens it. Ah HA! An enveloppe. He takes it, taking his time, and opens it, another adress. So he takes the enveloppe with him and starts walking. Behind him, a black sedan pulls over, and two men in suits and sun glasses go torwards the mailbox, surprised to not find anything...
So Joe, walks to the other adress, same routine, he waits an hour or two thinking "I'm a secret agent", no more enthousiastic then that... He then walks around and finds another enveloppe, takes it, finds another adress, walks away... Behind him, two sedans pull up, men in suits come out of them and shoot at the each other.
He arrives at a warehouse, goes in, and sees a whole bunch of men in suits with guns in their hands. Joe takes his plastic cup and says; "Could you guvs spare some change?"

GX3

SirKoto51 responds:

Thanx Man, honestly, looking back at that song now, I think it's not that good either XD i do have another i made that has a tiny bit more action and instruments to it, I am kinda new at making MIDI's, They are fun to make whenever I have some free time on my hands. So thanks for the review, and good scene/MIDI agreement.

You have a talent for composition.

4/5 & 8/10

I really loved your music. The only thing that I think needs work is good equalization of all the tracks so it has a more balanced sound.

But, my headphones are broken so it could just be me. =)

Anyways, I really enjoy it, it's catchy, and I just uploaded a new track myself and it would be great if you told me what you think.

SirKoto51 responds:

i agree, i think that the bari saxshould be a little louder and that the percussion could be a little less forte. Sure thing I'll comment on you're composition.

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Dec 31, 2009
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2 min 36 sec

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