Not bad, it certainly would be suitable for fast-paced action games, fighting ones or RPG games. The best part was around the last 30 seconds.
Still, from my opinion, I think you should make it a bit more epic.
Just my opinion.....
Still, keep up the great work!
Hmm...more epic? What did you have in mind?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.