pretty sick intro

opens with a nie loop, and a few vocal FX. the bass though, desnt go with the song in my opinion. IT would sound better if it were a filtered sine bass.
And that 2 note melody you use with that loud hornlike synth is alright, but a little repetitive, and it may be a little too loud.
breakdown is good, untill you play a kick dru beat that comes out of nowhere.
its kinda off. so far you have something pretty awesome going. I'd suggest you take your time, and finish this song!
5/5

-Mans0n