pretty sick intro
opens with a nie loop, and a few vocal FX. the bass though, desnt go with the song in my opinion. IT would sound better if it were a filtered sine bass.
And that 2 note melody you use with that loud hornlike synth is alright, but a little repetitive, and it may be a little too loud.
breakdown is good, untill you play a kick dru beat that comes out of nowhere.
its kinda off. so far you have something pretty awesome going. I'd suggest you take your time, and finish this song!
Cheers man, wasn't too sure about the kick during the break either haha
thanks for taking the time to criticize, I appreciate it so much :)