Very short needs more depth to it
Hmm well first off this was pretty short that would probably be the first issue you want to fix up, well it is a loop, but should be somewhat longa, just something with abit more depth in it, Now as for the loop, its actually kinda catchy, but is again just too short, its basicly the same thing over and over, so i suggest adding abit more "TUNES' to it, something that will stretch it abit more, it is a cool loop just needs abit more, but anyways hope these tips help on making a better track or even song. but anyways goodluck.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more depth and a few more tunes to it.
this is SPARTA (but not worthy of being it)
its a good loop, but the main synth is too quiet and its missing a bassline.
That song is really plain. Surely i think that you could've done better than that. Could you?
this loop is SPARTA!!!
it sucks but its spart
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