If I were you I would add more variation in the melody. The song sounds nice, with the effects and all, but if you had more variation in general it would be better. Like switching up the drums, and maybe adding a bassline, but hey this is pretty good stuff! I went through your other music and I can tell you've totally improved! With a little more practice, you can be making some really good tracks soon. Keep it up dude, don't let anything discourage you! God Bless.
thanks a lot man. Yeah i've been meaning to revisit this song and revamp it a little. Its nice to hear some constructive ideas lol
its basically the same 8 sec loop streched over 3 adn a half minutes.
its my first mess around with samples and effects..