I like the intro
I like the sound in the intro and the pause in the middle, however, you might want to change the notes of the piano.
Also, I know it's really hard to create a good drum beat in FL Studio. Thats why I use Reason 4.0 when I want a solid beat.
I use Poizone a lot when creating in FL, it has nice sounds, you might want to check it out :)
yeah, I use reason for songs too. I find FL a little simpler. But if you don't install new drum kits in FL, they get a little repetative.