Listen on speakers with good bass! if not it wont have much energy. pretty long intro, so be patient, son will breakdown then slowly buildup from there.
listen to the whole song before you vote please.
comments and criticism are welcome and appreciated.
Enjoy
It was okay. .
Just a bit boring and on the repetitive side. There wern't enough elements for me to get a hold of, it just seemed to drone on and on really. Also, take into account people like me don't have very bassy speakers, so I can only judge according to what I hear. . . It's a good attempt, just needs quite a lot added to it, this has a lot of potential.
Dont finish it.
Its no good. Its calm all the way through, unlike what you said.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Mans0n 
