the song is creepy and dark but i suppose thats what is was made for.
But Great job but work on the voice on the end i cant understand what your saying unless thats the point.
I like it, exept for that annoying sound gap at the end. It has a different sound to it... Maybe if you added more background and made it longer. You should turn up the volume on the whole "and the moon became as blood" part. I could barely hear it with my speakers turned up to the max.
Also, mind if I take this and edit it a little? Pweease?
All I ask is that you let me hear the finished edit. Thanks for the review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.