This melody sounds familiar... TOO familiar.
Eh. It's okay. Definitely nothing impressive, but a a few sections in here sound EXACTLY the same as several of MY tracks. Coincidence? Perhaps. Either way, you have potential.. you really just need to put more effort into your tracks.
jesus christ, are you trying to give me a flashback?
no critical comments because it just sounds so oldskool and it's touching me in strange places.
Ta very much ........ its all about the right feel