Its clearly you, but much mellower than im used to from you, it has the same feel as some of your other songs and your definatly improved your transitions since you created rain but it suffers some of the repetitiveness that appears in most of your work. repetition is only good if its built upon not if you keep looping back to it, straying a bit away and then returning once again it makes the song rather uninteresting to listen to by the end of the song id felt like id listened to the whole thing a few times already i actually had to check and make sure it hadent looped on me already or i hit the refresh button without knowing it. You should be conscientious of repetition and how often you use it in your songs because its getting a little out of hand buddy. I want to emphasize that i don't NOT like the song I just think you can do far better than this because you have an ear for music and what sounds good and talent with your synthesizer? i'm not sure what you used to create this so i apologize for my ignorance i know very little about music other than what i like about it and what i do not. Keep what i say in mind and know that i like your music i just feel without me being brutally honest about what i think there is no reason for my to review your works.
-Your Fan? Evintine
:) Thanks, Evintine. And yeah, originally this was going to be just a 3 minute song. I intentionally repeated it because I felt the bridge deserved a second breath of life with the new organ lead melody.
There are quite a few differences between the two halves though. All the automation of the filters is different and a new guitar lick of soft-picking and slap is introduced. I tried to keep it subtle though. :D guess too subtle for some people's tastes though. :d
glad you liked it enough to pick it apart so much, Evintine. :) thanks for the review, mate.
It has its own feel to it, a very unique song to say the least. It feels hopeful. Like there's been sorrow, but we'll all keep living, trying desperately to find happiness somewhere in life. Or something sappy and cliche like that. Nice song, like all the others you made. You never fail to impress me, Durn. Keep up the good work!
:) Thanks Tash. You hit the nail on the head with the feel of the song. :) Glad you enjoyed it, man.
And it has a nice base to it, a very nice base.
:) Thanks Shadman, glad you like it.
Your mastering now sounds among the proffesionals!
Its way up there!!!
Thanks for your tips i am creating in complete new way now!!!
Thanks dude. :) Your new stuff is sounding really good. Very melodic and harmonious. :)
I never got bored listening to this it was full of variety and fun good job especially the on the bass!
:D thanks nanyt! glad you liked it, dude. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.