I defginitely liked the melodies, but you really need to go and remaster this, the bass end was fuzzing about all over the place for me, and the bassline almost cut out completely at the low end.
What it needs is the bass to be cut down a lot more as it is dominating, and shouldn't be. The melody in behind is cut out.
On a lighter side the synths are brilliant, and the melodies were good.
However, the transition at 1:56, there was something I didn't like about it. It was too plain, like 2 blocks put together, a sweep would be nice. I like sweeps, or just anything.. Before and after 3:00 there is much too much going on at once, and the levels were way too high, that is a point where it needs some compression and better mastering in general.
The intro was nice, until the bass, as that melody was well composed, but as I said, that bass, that kick, and that melody make me cringe.... they hurt me and my speakers.
Transition at 0:50 was nicely done. Overall it was a great song... melody wise. It has all the right elements for a FP song, lovely think chorded synths, just with a better bassline and an EQ'ed kick, this could be something.
Blarg... sorry if I'm not helpful :(.