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Dec 24, 2009 | 5:53 PM EST
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4.3 MB
3 min 44 sec
3.34 / 5.00

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Rated 3.34 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Trance

Author Comments

i know im not very good at FLstudio....which is why i upload songs....i need to know what im doing wrong to get better right? so let me know whats wrong with this song...and be bitterly honest.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

getting there!

it's been a while since i checked, so i'm back.
You're making pretty decent progress, so keep it up!

it's nice and varied, and i liked what you did with percussion.
However there is no bass line in some bits. (you can get away with that just fine, but don't overdo it)
And like DjDekail said, your songs need some more structure, make sure you build up to a climax, then build that down towards the end, etc.

keep up the good stuff man (again, you're getting there!)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

not realy my taste

but for a tech song it sounds good

MegaMidget7 responds:

haha thanks for the 10/10 mate...what is your type of music?..ill give it a try.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

My review..

..won't be as informative as DjDekail, mainly because I seem to be suffereing from the same thing you do.

You're not a bad musician by any means, all of your melodies flow together very well and listening i can understand that musically, you KNOW what you're doing.

It's eq'ing, mastering, and a lack of understanding of the genre that sets you behind. And even so, you're not bad, but not potentially your best.

Because I'm the same way.

But just to rebute your quote.

MegaMidget7 responds:

ok done deal...before making my next song...ill stude the make up of a true techno song... thanks for the advice. Ill look foward to hearing from you again XD


Rated 4 / 5 stars

So you want honesty? Here comes a lenghty review..

OK where to start...
I would have liked to see some ping pong echo on the first synth to give a little more interest.
The addition of the drums in the way you did was nice. The the second synth was a nice addition. (:27)

At (:55) It should have built to a high point where the arped' synth was included. Going around a bar or 2 with that then adding the more paddy synth. (1:30) was a nice transition but the drums should have been building the whole time into another high point. The (2:18) synth could have been used elsewhere to add some more interest and things. (2:40) the drums should have grown into something larger and more interesting. Then flowing in the low point.

You could have then built into a high point to the end.


Slowly cut out things until the end.

I think improvements could have been added. But the overall feel was good.
I'm gunna' review as Trance as thats what is was submitted as.

Just an opinion. Keep improving!

MegaMidget7 responds:

thanks for the advice...ill take it into consideration with my next song....look foward to hearing from you again XD