Okay. First off. This is my very FIRST song... I mean, the first thing I've ever actually put together as a song.
Second, I wasn't exactly sure where to put this so.... I stuck it in techno.
It is VERY long and I hope people can actually sit through it all and listen to it ALL. I'm looking for some constructive criticism here. Just looking to get better... not profusely bombarded with insults and profanity.

About the song:
There are 4 parts to this song. It starts off as a relaxing melody, almost like a lullaby which variates here and there. Next the song morphs into something completely different with more of an eerie feel to it (2:40ish). Then the song changes again and gives the song a bit of a cultural feel. Lastly, all of the changes come together and form the final rhythm and beat of the song. It ends with the same melody that it started with the necessary touches to "ending the song".

I hope at least some people have the patience to listen to the WHOLE thing and write a thoughtful review... that is all I ask.

Thank you for your time.