If the farting sound in the background were removed I think it would be better, maybe replace it with another sound, it sounds like creaking. Thats all the advice I can give :( sorry, let me know if you alter it, I would like to hear it. I like how the drums opened up in the beginning.
I doesn't sound to all be in tempo.
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