first of all the sound is great.
if your going for a melo, head bobbing sound thats how i hear it right now. i like it like this.
but since it's labeled dance mode i figure you want to be able to dance to it. in that case i'd say it needs a climax. it builds up and then breaks down a little around 1:37. after the break down i was expecting it to come in loud and more energetic, but it didn't so i just continued to bob my head. it's gotcha be casual most of the time, but then kick for the people to go crazy. also turn that bass up, get the 808 pumpin!
overall sounds good dude
9/10 cuz its a work in progress