it needs allot improvement dude,
the bass your using isnt mcuh of a bass..
needs bettah EQing [specially the bass frequentions.]
besides that, the guitar is a bit thin .. it needs reverb to make it phat and thick :)
kick could use some bettah frequentions aswell as compression.
if you need ANY help, no matter what, just hit me up by PM if you want.
rating: 6,5 -> 7
i likke the beginning alot! its way catchy and something you could dance to, then you change it up a little with the synth piano or whatever that was but then it totally dies towards the end and kills the song, i think puttin some more but heavier bass hits towards the end or some high pitch stoof and just freak out it would be cool or mix another song in haha. anyways nice work.
WURST THING EVAR!!!!! It's really good.
It's pretty decent, annoying at times.