GOOD
This is actually pretty fuckin good dude. You should focus more on serious writing cause I really enjoyed this track. Finish this, please.
Welcome to England, the time is 06:00 AM the village is filled with snow, I step outside, i see my breath... I sit at the top of the hill and watch the sunrise it fills the darkness with light, everywhere is white with snow, the vampires of England have retired for the night...
GOOD
This is actually pretty fuckin good dude. You should focus more on serious writing cause I really enjoyed this track. Finish this, please.
Alright so
Lemme offer you some advice. This is nice so far but, it lacks melody. Its just pad and drums. Im not sure if you have trouble writing melodies or what but its not hard.
Just take whatever key this song is in "the first note" and use notes in that key, specifically the 1st 3rd 4th and 5th. To start out with anyway.
So if this is in the key of C, use C E F and G. and so on and so forth
This just sounds incomplete my man.
i like apple pie, not a clue what key this is in, it came like this, doesn't fir in line with any of the other synths i got, how would i change the key of the other synths to fit this?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.