Song starts out really well!! Going great with variety!! But you seem to end your songs a couple seconds before they should end. You need to have the song quiet down and then have one final note really quietly. Another thing is that you need to have the melody over power the other stuff in terms of volume. 5/5 9/10
It was quite good, sounded okay. Not my style of music, really, but I'm not one to rate on that. My beef with this is that it is very hard to hear an actual melody, but it really sounds like you just tried to make something loud & dance-styled without really giving much thought as to a tune. There is a tune there, but it's hard to grasp, and doesn't really do much except repeat. Perhaps a little more variety in the tune, and make the tune stand out a little over the background sounds would make this piece better.
yea thats a good point...
thanks for the review and criticism!
this is pretty great, not the best but great. <downloaded>
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