Needs solid structure
Needs some solid structural changes. Build ups and breakdowns would be nice :) ...
Also that first instrument is loud and the kick is a bit quiet.
Not a bad track. Some mixing needs to be done though
Author Comments
Please, im just starting out. Anyone that knows music, please help me out with a review.
Needs work
Names Zen. The one thing that really needs help with this piece of music is that you need to clarify the insturments way more. And as with BOUNC3's review please try your hardest to lower the volume on the first instrument. I may not make flash or music but I have a taste for both. I'll review your music and tell what's needed. Do your best!
Heitoki responds:
I try, but this was the first peiece I made that actually sounded like music (sorta). I know i soulda killed the volume allittle, but as mentioned before, when i exported, it wouldnt keep its current volume setting.
Thx for reviewing, and i will do better.
I'll be blunt...
I -hate- trance. This song is alright, most especially for a newbie artist. Personally I'd work on variation, length and more instruments.
But as for Lord-Steel's review... what a fool. Nobody just becomes a great music artist straight away, and that goes for everything.
Ok, so there is a lot to work on, but "Lord-Steel" is just one heck of a moron. I presume you upload your songs to NG for opinions and constructive criticism, just like I do, since it helps you know exactly what you're improving. Lord-Steel's review is FAR FROM constructive criticism; it's just a load of rubbish. You should always ignore people like that!
Heitoki responds:
Thank you for actually realizing what these songs are here for. I want to get better, i just need time. Anyways.. thanks for your review. I hope to here from you again in the future ^^
I like the style here!
All the sounds are quite pretty, though they are be a bit repetetetive... The opening sound really is too loud for such a sharp sounding clip though.... But I like it ^.^! The beat is pretty decent too ^.^! Keep making more of this ^.^!
Heitoki responds:
Im sry about that first instrument >.> i do appreciate the review ^^
PURE CRAP
dude....come on....WTF????
are you trying to kill someone????
lets say...i know music very well.....the production side of it, and from what i heard you are a pure newbie....i cant even describe how much you need to improve, in every aspect of music production:
Melody work
Sound
Mastering
Structure and other stuff.
keep on trying prodcuing shit like that....even my first track ever was better than this shit.
But i gotta give you the credit fot posting shit like that on the web....you gotta be very brave for that.
btw.....what soft did you use for making this horrible muixture of shity sounds (i cant even call it music).
Heitoki responds:
lol, i dont know if thats a review or not, but i will get better. Err... um, i guess thx for a review?
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