hey

well at least faegoesroar commented, usually you don't get that.
anyways, try another genre, techno is REALLY overdone, and personally, i think it's played out.
as for this song, it's not very good, but at least it's not horrible.
the EQ seems inexistant, so here's a tip:
when youmake your song, put EVERY one of your instruments into a mixer track, then individually EQ them using multiband compresor and prametric EQ and the like, it really helps the sound of your song.
as long as youhave EQ down, everything else kinda falls into place, so practice EQing.