I'll be consructive

The beat and the bass are fantastic.

The melody is catchy, but I definitally think you need different instruments. Something slightly distorted fatty synth sound (however, I can tell you wanna be different, so I wanna see if I can help at all) To help, I'd need to know what program your using.

So yeah...uhh, contact me back! Sorry I couldn't actually be as construcive as I'd lik to have been. xD