Really cool intro sounds... waiting for it to build up - then it goes straight into the next bit - i dont think it flows that well... I like the sounds that come in at 28 seconds, but then it seems to get a little bit cramped? i think? I think the kick is a long sample, and the fuzz from the kick is sounding a bit wierd or it may be the bass.... the bassline in my opinion doesnt seem to fit it, more a jumpier bass, short and sweet would suit better!
Also i like the sort of christmassy feel to it with the key you used!
One thing i dont like is the keychange? I think that doesnt flow and work as well :/ If it could flow into it better i suppose it would work.
Also it seems as if there are some flat/sharp notes off the main key - this doesnt work... it just clashes.
But i actually love the style you've tried here. :) And its really cool! I actually like it!
so 9/10 :)
and a 5/5 :)