Love it man!
i think you can make this song better and way longer, im sirprised this is the 1st time its a long song.
But just tlittle touch ups you can do especially afyter the break in the song is:
make the snare clearer and bring forward the synth. i love the melody, just feels like it will phase into the front @ some point but doesnt. you know what i mean?
Eh what ever its a good song, you dnt have to take my advice!