Fertile Grounds and Open Skies

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vocals recorded by yours truly

"Once, i was the savior
Of fertile grounds and open skies.
One broken oath and we shall both,
forever wonder........why?"



I'm so glad I randomly decided to log into the chat, or else I would not have found your music. This is an awesome track! I can visualize so many scenarios in this song. I simply wish it wasn't so short....

SessileNomad responds:

you should check out my newer stuff, its much better

Decent work!

Well, its a very ambientish DnB. Amazing synth work and the drums are great. Voices are nicely recorded and coudl be heard clearly. Those are a nice touch btw. Ncie poem at the beginning too. Bass however, is sadly lacking. There's only one bass and its a bit repetitive. Its also too damn short. However, given the short amount of time you had, i wont reduce ur points too much for that.


P.S This is your judging review from NGADM Round 1. I posted it for ya just cos its always nice to have more reviews.

SessileNomad responds:

indeed it is, i was getting a feeling of Deja vu as i read this, but i understand now

and i agree with everything :)

Vocals were too Manowar

I think that the music of the track was very good, but the vocals need to have something done to them - perhaps lose some of the gurgling sound effects from the voice, as it sounds very difficult to understand at the moment.

The music scarcely needs any improvement upon from someone like you, so just keep doing what you do. It could probably be longer, but that would be the only flaw that this piece has. Giving it more length enables more variation and a chance for your talents to shine even more.

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SessileNomad responds:

i almost took the chorus effect off a little bit, but i decided to go with it, guess i made the wrong move xD

length..yes...i know

thanks for the review man


i think other than the fact that its just too short,u need to burn this to a CD. when u die, present this to the angel guarding heaven, and he will beg you to go in! very nice!

SessileNomad responds:

ill give that a shot...when i die...

Good but too short

And once again the mix between ambient and DnB is done very well. The melodies here create a quite dark and somewhat cold atmosphere and the constant drums that don't change too much during this song just underline the darkness of this song even though the title "open skies" would suggest a more happy atmosphere. But the lyrics also indicate that this song isn't meant to be happy.

My only real negative point is the fact that this song is too short. It barely started and then it's already over again. So yeah... make it longer! :P

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SessileNomad responds:

yeah its too short, it happens though

yeah this track isnt really a happy one, i guess the title could impose that though

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Credits & Info

4.33 / 5.00

Dec 18, 2009
2:40 PM EST
Drum N Bass
File Info
1.9 MB
1 min 42 sec

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