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Listen to song First!:)

Okay okay so i came up with little beat but i just cant finish it, and i also know it needs something but i just cant put my finger on it.....So i decided to post it up to see if anyone can give me some advice or somethin, so yeah please help

Oh as u can tell, i'm still a beginner with fl studio

THANKS!!!!:)

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i think i know what it needs...

at 00.53 to 00.54 there needs to be a more intense beat for about 10 to 15 seconds...

and at 1.39 add a 5 to 10 seconds of an equally intense beat/finish.

Love it!

As a beginner of fl studio.. This is pretty damn good..

So yah asked......

Well, tbh with yah, great song. I can see why you want to finish this. Alright, the biggest thing here that I can "hear" is that you need a better, harder key change. Introduce that light piano from the beggining maybe? Have it play a more complicated round, as if it was "dancing" with the melody, complimenting it. Your kick/bass, it fits nicely with the light melody you have going here. I personally think that you could bring up a slightly heavier bass in the background, grinding on with it in a such, pah, wish I knew how to explain this one. You know how you have your main piano synth playing right? Like that, but, its a bass tone in the background, subtle. I hope you understand what I am saying :P Other thoughts: Have it build up a bit more, then go all out with a twisting nether of piano's and synth's. You have a great song, and well, to sum this up, finish it and I hope my review helped you. I am just a listener, not a creator :)

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Dec 18, 2009
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1 min 43 sec

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