This is really nice.
I think the intro scared some people away...it seems like the average music listener just doesn't dig dissonance, huh? Anyway, the only think I can suggest is more percussion, it sounds really empty in some areas. Also, use an equalizer, the song sounds a tad muddy. Other than that, I have to say good job on the melodies and overall progression, I like the darker feel of this song!
Thanks mate! yeah i tend to agree... i think people listen to 5 secs... and then either vote low or skip to the next song, without even hearing enough to realise there is some nice trance melodies in this. The songs i write that kick off from the word go with a pumpin beat and bass usually do better... people are like goldfish.. short attention spans :P Thanks for the Review!!