Cool!
I liked it. It got a little overloading. Bass was coming in and started to make my speakers vibrate until around 1:30. Then at 2:03, it started again.
I like the idea, riffs and rhythm are great! Just needs work.
Let me know if you plan on updating this. I'm guessing you used FL Studio?
Anyways, nice start.
-JNR
3/5 but I'll give you 4/5 'cause I feel like it :D